CHRIS RICE COOPER is a newspaper writer, feature stories writer, poet, fiction writer, photographer, and painter. She maintains a blog at https://chrisricecooper.blogspot.com. She has a Bachelor's in Criminal Justice and completed all of her poetry and fiction workshops required for her Master’s in Creative Writing with a focus on poetry. She, her husband Wayne, sons Nicholas and Caleb, cats Nation and Alaska reside in the St. Louis area.
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Thursday, February 7, 2019
#16 INSIDE THE EMOTION OF FICTION "Little Boy Lost" by J.D. Trafford
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****JD Trafford’sLittle Boy Lostis the sixteenthin a
never-ending series calledINSIDE THE EMOTION OF FICTION where the
Chris Rice Cooper Blog (CRC) focuses on one specific excerpt from a
fiction genre and how that fiction writer wrote that specific excerpt.All INSIDE THE EMOTION OF FICTIONlinks are
at the end of this piece.
Name of fiction work?
And were there other names you considered that you would like to share with us? Little Boy Lost
is the title. When I initially started writing it, the
working title was St. Louis Blues, which I knew was terrible but I need
Fiction genre?Ex science fiction, short story, fantasy
novella, romance, drama, crime, plays, flash fiction, historical, comedy,etc.And how many pages long?Little Boy Lost is a novel of legal fiction/mystery.It is 316 pages.
Has this been published?
And it is totally fine if the answer is no.If yes, what publisher and what publication date?It has been published by Thomas & Mercer, and it was released July of
What is the date you began writing this piece of fiction and the date when you
completely finished the piece of fiction?I wrote an initial draft over ten years ago, but it didn’t feel
right.Then I started a new draft after the Michael Brown
shooting in Ferguson, Missouri, and the book took a year to write from there.
Where did you do most of
your writing for this fiction work?And
please describe in detail.And can you
please include a photo?I worked at an old roll-top desk that was my wife’s
great grandfather’s desk.I usually
write in the early morning before the kids get out of bed.Hemmingway said to write before the critics
in your head wake up, and I think that’s good advice.
What were your writing
habits while writing this work- did you drink something as you wrote, listen to
music, write in pen and paper, directly on laptop; specific time of day?No music (unlike Stephen King) and no alcohol (unlike . . . a lot of
writers).Just coffee and a laptop.I think a lot of writers spend too much time
talking about being writers and thinking about what it would be like to be a
writer.Instead, you just have to
write.I try to write every day, but
life sometimes interferes.
Can you give the reader
just enough information for them to understand what is going on in the excerpt?By this point in the book, Justin Glass has agreed to find Tanisha
Walker’s missing brother, a boy who nobody wants to be found.He decides to spend one light looking for him
by visiting former girlfriends, and then goes back to his office late at
night.This is when the scene unfolds. Please include excerpt
and include page numbers as reference.The excerpt can be as short or as long as you prefer.Chapter 8 of Little Boy Lost
was a narrow path to the alley between my office and the building next
door.I pulled out my cell phone and
dialed 911 as I ran toward the noise. When the operator answered, I slowed a
little, telling her who and where I was, but kept going forward.
wanted me to stop and wait, but I didn’t.
kids stood over Hermes’s brother in the back of the Northside Roastery.
was on the ground.A broken computer
monitor sat nearby.One arms was
bent.His other arm tried to protect his
head from another blow as he struggled to crawl away.
didn’t think anything through.NO
plan.I just had to stop it.‘Police, get your hands u in the air.”I held up my cell phone like it was a badge
and put my hand on my hip like I was about to pull a gun.In the darkness and shadows of the back
alley, I hoped that nobody could tell that none of it was real.I kept barking orders at them as I moved
didn’t stick around.The trio took off
down the alley, and within seconds they were gone.
I crouched next to him, but anticipating another strike, he whimpered and tried
to get away.“It’s Justin Glass.You’re going to be OK.Lie still.”I lowered my voice, calm.“Lie
still, Nik; help is coming.”
put my hand out.I tried to provide a
gentle touch to reassure Nikolas that I wasn’t a threat, but as I reached for
him they alley flooded with flashing lights and sirens.I turned and was blinded.
Somebody yelled at me,
but I didn't understand. "What?" I asked to a jumble of commands.
Then a sickening flash of clarity as two police officers rushed toward me with
their guns drawn: I was a black man, crouched over a downed white man in a dark
alley. This was how it ends.
"I'm Justin Gl---" I managed before a thick white cop drove me into
Why is this excerpt so
emotional for you?And can you describe
your own emotional experience of writing this specific excerpt?It was difficult scene to write on a variety of levels.Obviously it is a tragedy.On a superficial level it is about being at
the wrong place at the wrong time, but a deeper level it raises issues about
racial inequalities, implicit bias, and, frankly, express bias or racism.
I rewrote it many times.The first
time there was no express mention of race and wasn’t particularly violent.I was afraid that it would come across as
crude or cartoonish, but after multiple versions I think I was able to bring
out the feelings and emotions that I wanted without going over the top.
Even after re-reading it for this query, my heart beats a little faster
and I get sick to my stomach.
Other works you have
No Time To Run
No Time To Die
No Time To Hide
(coming in March of 2019)
Anything you would like
to add?There is nothing wrong with writing fiction that
appeals to a broad audience.Literary
fiction has its place, but give me a murder and a mystery any day.I think that professors underestimate the
lessons that can be learned and the issues that can be illuminated by a good
J.D. Trafford is an award-winning author who has been profiled in
Mystery Scene Magazine (A “writer of merit”). His debut novel was selected as an IndieReader bestselling pick,
and his books have topped Amazon’s bestseller lists, including Amazon’s #1
In addition to graduating with honors from a Top 20 Law school,
J.D. Trafford has worked as a civil and criminal prosecutor, an associate at a
large national law firm, and a non-profit attorney for people who could not
afford legal representation.
Prior to law school, J.D. Trafford worked in Washington D.C. and
lived in Saint Louis, Missouri.He
worked on issues of housing, education, and poverty in communities of color.