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Backstory of the Poem
“Side Yard”
by Ellen Foos
Can you go through the
step-by-step process of writing this poem from the moment the idea was first
conceived in your brain until final form?
The first draft
developed in one sitting, then some minor edits as I fine-tuned it and also took
it to the critique group to which I belong. Someone actually advised me to take
the White House line out of there but I decided to keep it. Maybe it wasn't
such bad advice!
Where were you when
you started to actually write the poem?
And please describe the place in great detail.
I believe I was at
work when I started and finished the poem.
What month and year
did you start writing this poem?
I wrote this poem in October of 2014
What do you want
readers of this poem to take from this poem?
He built the house we
lived in all our lives, my mother and their seven children. He did all the
repair work himself so the ladder was a constant presence around the house. The
neighborhood did change and get built up over the years but not to the extent
that it was ruined. I did move to NYC after college for ten years and never
returned to live near my parents. This poem is mostly nostalgia for the
carefree aspect of childhood. (Foos's parents above left)
Which part of the poem
was the most emotional of you to write and why?
I didn't know when I
started writing the poem that it would end in such a feeling of loss for my
father. He was a product of his generation and not particularly good at
expressing his feelings. (Foos Family the day of Joseph Foos's funeral. Ellen Foos up front on the left dressed in black).
Birthdate and the day he died?
May 21, 1921 – June 2014
over these neighborhoods and created neighborhoods that had no room or space for family intimacy or even neighbors. Along with the death of what neighbors and family used to be the author of the poem has to deal with the death of her own father. And the realization that she not
only lost her father but her way of life, her neighborhood or family or own view of America. There still is hope – even though the side yard no longer exists – there is a ladder that her father left there. How can she reach it?
Your analysis starts
out fine but the mention of the White House didn't have any political message.
I always felt sorry when I lived in NYC that the natural world was
inaccessible. That probably did enter into the poem.
The poem was published
here: Contemporary American Voices (January 2015) https://contemporary
americanvoices.
wordpress.com/2015/01/01/
januarys-featured-poet-james-keane/
americanvoices.
wordpress.com/2015/01/01/
januarys-featured-poet-james-keane/
Side
Yard
When
we tired of the backyard
there
was the side yard,
accessory
to our crimes,
a
hideout, a conduit for racing
full
circle around the house.
The
best place to backtrack
when
being pursued.
Lilac
trees on the side
had
a shaggy look.
It
was easy to peek
into
basement windows.
The
neighbors were close
but
never onto us.
Corner
lots expanded blandly,
we
had two sharp corridors.
Here’s
why I left New York City,
no
side yard.
Who
speaks of
the
White House lawn
and
thinks side yard?
When
I lost my father,
I
thought how it changed me,
the
side yard I’ll never visit again,
the
ladder he stored there.
From
The Remaining Ingredients, copyright 2016 by Ellen Foos. Do not copy or
distribute in any form without express permission of the author.
Ellen Foos is a senior production editor for Princeton
University Press and the publisher of Ragged Sky Press. She has received
fellowships to the MacDowell Colony and the Vermont Studio Center.
She coedited Dark as a Hazel Eye: Coffee & Chocolate Poems and Eating Her Wedding Dress: A Collection of Clothing Poems. Her new poems are gathered in The Remaining Ingredients and have appeared in Mead, The Curator, Edison Literary Review, and Contemporary American Voices.
She coedited Dark as a Hazel Eye: Coffee & Chocolate Poems and Eating Her Wedding Dress: A Collection of Clothing Poems. Her new poems are gathered in The Remaining Ingredients and have appeared in Mead, The Curator, Edison Literary Review, and Contemporary American Voices.
Ellen Foos
Contemporary
American Voices
The
Remaining Ingredients
Princeton
University Press
Ragged Sky
Press
Dark as a
Hazel Eye: Coffee & Chocolate Poems
Eating Her
Wedding Dress: A Collection of Clothing
Poems
https://www.amazon.com/s/ref=nb_sb_noss?url=search-alias%3Dstripbooks&field-keywords=Eating+Her+Wedding+Dress%3A++A+Collection+of+Clothing+Poems+
001 December 29, 2017
Margo
Berdeshevksy’s “12-24”
002 January 08, 2018
Alexis
Rhone Fancher’s “82 Miles From the Beach, We Order The Lobster At Clear Lake
Café”
003 January 12, 2018
Barbara
Crooker’s “Orange”
004 January 22, 2018
Sonia
Saikaley’s “Modern Matsushima”
005 January 29, 2018
Ellen
Foos’s “Side Yard”
006 February 03, 2018
Susan
Sundwall’s “The Ringmaster”
https://chrisricecooper.blogspot.com/2018/02/6-backstory-of-poem-susan-sundwalls.html
007 February 09, 2018
Leslea
Newman’s “That Night”
https://chrisricecooper.blogspot.com/2018/02/7-backstory-of-poem-that-night-by.html
008 February 17, 2018
Alexis
Rhone Fancher “June Fairchild Isn’t Dead”
https://chrisricecooper.blogspot.com/2018/02/8-backstory-of-poem-june-fairchild-isnt.html
009 February 24, 2018
Charles
Clifford Brooks III “The Gift of the Year With Granny”
010 March 03, 2018
Scott
Thomas Outlar’s “The Natural Reflection of Your Palms”
https://chrisricecooper.blogspot.com/2018/03/chris-ricecooper-caccoopaol.html
011 March 10, 2018
Arya F. Jenkins “After Diane Beatty’s Photograph, “History Abandoned" https://chrisricecooper.blogspot.com/2018/03/11-backstory-of-poem-after-diane.html
Arya F. Jenkins “After Diane Beatty’s Photograph, “History Abandoned" https://chrisricecooper.blogspot.com/2018/03/11-backstory-of-poem-after-diane.html
012 March 17, 2018
Angela Narciso Torres’s “What I Learned This Week”
https://chrisricecooper.blogspot.com/2018/03/12-backstory-of-poem-series-angela.html
https://chrisricecooper.blogspot.com/2018/03/12-backstory-of-poem-series-angela.html
013 March 24, 2018
Jan
Steckel’s “Holiday On ICE”
014 March 31, 2018
Ibrahim
Honjo’s “Colors”
https://chrisricecooper.blogspot.com/2018/03/14-backstory-of-poem-ibrahim-honjos.html
015 April 14, 2018
Marilyn
Kallett’s “Ode to Disappointment”
016 April 27, 2018
Beth
Copeland’s “Reliquary”
https://chrisricecooper.blogspot.com/2018/04/16-backstory-of-poem-reliquary-by-beth.html
017 May 12, 2018
Marlon
L Fick’s “The Swallows of Barcelona”
https://chrisricecooper.blogspot.com/2018/05/17-backstory-of-poem-swallows-of.html
018 May 25, 2018
Juliet
Cook’s “ARTERIAL DISCOMBOBULATION”
https://chrisricecooper.blogspot.com/2018/05/18-backstory-of-poem-arterial.html
019 June 09, 2018
Alexis
Rhone Fancher’s “Stiletto Killer. . . A Surmise”
020 June 16, 2018
Charles
Rammelkamp’s “At Last I Can Start Suffering”
https://chrisricecooper.blogspot.com/2018/06/20-backstory-of-poem-at-least-i-can.html
021 July 05, 2018
Marla
Shaw O’Neill’s “Wind Chimes”
022 July 13, 2018
Julia Gordon-Bramer’s
“Studying Ariel”
023 July 20, 2018
Bill Yarrow’s “Jesus
Zombie”
https://chrisricecooper.blogspot.com/2018/07/23-backstory-of-poem-jesus-zombie-by.html
024 July 27, 2018
Telaina Eriksen’s “Brag
2016”
https://chrisricecooper.blogspot.com/2018/07/24-backstory-of-poem-brag-2016-by.html
025 August 01, 2018
Seth Berg’s (It is only
Yourself that Bends – so Wake up!”
https://chrisricecooper.blogspot.com/2018/08/25-backstory-of-poem-it-is-only.html
026 August 07, 2018
David Herrle’s “Devil In
the Details”