Monday, September 2, 2019

#76 Inside The Emotion of Fiction's MONARCHS OF THE NORTHEAST KINGDOM by Chera Hammons Miller



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****Chera Hammons Miller’s MONARCHS OF THE NORTHEAST KINGDOM  is #76 in the never-ending series called INSIDE THE EMOTION OF FICTION where the Chris Rice Cooper Blog (CRC) focuses on one specific excerpt from a fiction genre and how that fiction writer wrote that specific excerpt.  All INSIDE THE EMOTION OF FICTION links are at the end of this piece. 

Name of fiction work? And were there other names you considered that you would like to share with us? The novel is titled Monarchs of the Northeast Kingdom. I’m a Texan, but I fell in love with the state of Vermont while attending college there. I knew early on that I wanted the story to take place somewhere in Vermont not far from Canada. I set it in the Northeast Kingdom in particular because it’s the coldest region in the state, and it’s isolated. I started writing under a title of just The Northeast Kingdom, but I knew that it needed something more specific, more in line with the themes. The full title appeared rather quickly when I got a little way into the work.


Fiction genre? Ex science fiction, short story, fantasy novella, romance, drama, crime, plays, flash fiction, historical, comedy, movie script, screenplay, etc. And how many pages long? Monarchs is generally what I would consider to be literary fiction with elements of suspense. It also has a significant concern for / awareness of wilderness, animals, and land management, which is why I submitted it to Torrey House Press. Before I submitted it, I read interviews with the Torrey House editors and felt like we’d be friends in real life. It’s about 76,000 words, or 244 pages as my word processor displays it. (Above Left:  Photo taken in December 2017)

Has this been published? And it is totally fine if the answer is no. If yes, what publisher and what publication date? Monarchs of the Northeast Kingdom
is currently set to be released by Torrey House Press (https://www.
torrey
house.org/in May of 2020. They’ve been downright wonderful to work with. I’m so happy the book found a home there!

What is the date you began writing this piece of fiction and the date when you completely finished the piece of fiction? I have neurological Lyme disease and was homebound for a couple of years; I wrote this book during that time. I was having a lot of cardiac-type issues and felt very immediately like any day could be my last for a long time, and writing a novel was something that was really important to me. I think I started it in the summer of 2017 and finished it around Christmas 2017, but I had been thinking about it for quite a while before I started writing. After working on it for a couple of months, I set a goal of writing 700 words per day. If I went over that goal, I didn’t count it toward the next day’s word count. I started over new every day. I sent the weekly word count to a friend on Facebook so that I had some accountability because I had started many novels before that I never finished. But I did not ever go to bed without having written 700 words.


Where did you do most of your writing for this fiction work? And please describe in detail. And can you please include a photo? I did all of the writing in my messy home office surrounded by my three large cats: Butter, Biscuit, and Kevin. (Right) There’s a decent-sized window opposite the door, and on the two parallel walls, my husband Daniel and I each have a desk (they face away from each other). He writes novels, too, though none have been picked up yet (but it’s only a matter of time). So a typical weekend morning sees us in our shared office both typing away on something while the cats go back and forth between us begging for scratches. My preferred method of procrastination or relaxation is to watch horse training videos online, so Daniel bought me headphones so I could do that without distracting him. (I find it mind boggling he doesn’t want to learn all he can about different horse training methods, too!) 

          The office window looks out on a rosebush and a big yucca. Mockingbirds like to sit on the yucca stalks and sing as loud as they can, which is really nice. Once I thought there was a bobwhite outside because I kept hearing it whistle, but when I looked out, I discovered it was actually a mockingbird’s imitation of a bobwhite. I often leave my computer to look out the window at the birds and the grazing horses in order to clear my head.

What were your writing habits while writing this work- did you drink something as you wrote, listen to music, write in pen and paper, directly on laptop; specific time of day? I started out on my desktop computer every morning with organic coffee in hand. It can take me a long time to fully wake up because of neurological and physical issues caused by the Lyme disease. My brain works best before noon, so I tried to get the writing done between about 10 a.m. and 12:30 p.m. every day. I can write later than that, but it’s difficult to concentrate and takes much more time to get the word count. No music, because I would end up just singing along and not working, but sometimes I kept the TV on in the background so the space behind me felt smaller. I can’t write if there’s too much space behind me. Weird, I know!
What is the summary of this specific fiction work? When Anna's husband John is murdered in the woods near their Vermont home, she can no longer hide from the secrets they'd been keeping. But she decides to add more of her own. In a landscape where poachers lurk, coyotes roam in packs, bears threaten the livestock, winter starves the wild animals, debilitating sickness is barely kept at bay, and any relationship is a risk, Anna hides John's death in a desperate effort to ensure her own survival. (Left:  Mount Mansfield in Stowe, Vermont)


What scene/excerpt of the book was the most emotional for you to write? I wanted the writing in the book to be beautiful and stark, but relatable. Sometimes this meant putting my emotions into it; sometimes I had to be careful to maintain a distance from Anna and her actions. The scene hardest for me to write was the one in which Anna is wrenched from her comfortable, safe life with John, when she starts to grasp that she is truly alone.

Why is this scene/excerpt so emotional for you to write?  And can you describe your own emotional experience of writing this specific excerpt? Anna’s emotions—her shock, her distress, and her feelings of disconnection and unreality after realizing that she has been left to fend for herself in a dangerous landscape—are based on my own in a similar situation. To write the scene and make it believable, I had to revisit what I went through myself. My first marriage ended when my spouse at the time abandoned me in our home in New Mexico, 35 miles from town, after witnessing a murder at work. 




Though he had always been an alcoholic with a temper, the PTSD resulting from that event caused him to spiral out of control. Finally he left, suddenly and indefinitely. I was stranded without money or a usable car, and I was also suffering from the neurological symptoms of my illness, which had not yet been diagnosed. 

          I didn’t tell anyone he’d left for two weeks because I was in such shock, nothing felt real. I spent a lot of my time just waiting to wake up from what felt like a bad dream. The house had no heat because the propane tank was empty, and it was in late fall, so it was cold; my houseplants all froze to death, my shampoo froze. There was no food. My cat and I would just sit on the couch under a blanket and I’d watch the light that fell onto the floors through the windows change and then disappear every day. By the time my parents found out and drove from Texas to pick me up, I’d lost 15 pounds.

It’s still difficult for me to read that scene in the book, because though Anna is strong and pulls herself together much more quickly than I did, it reminds me of those bad days. I hope any readers who have been through something similar will feel less alone when reading that scene, and know they are much more powerful and valuable than they might feel. Anna goes on to do things she never would have believed herself capable of. So have I.

Other works you have published? I’ve spent far more of my life as a poet than a novelist, so I’ve published individual poems in many journals, and I’ve also had several poetry books published. The first was a chapbook, Amaranthine Hour, which won the 2012 Jacar Press Chapbook Competition. It took nearly ten years to find a publisher for that one, and I had just about given up. I feel like winning that contest changed my life. More recently (2017) was The Traveler’s Guide to Bomb City, a book of poems set in my hometown of Amarillo, Texas. I have a poetry book, Maps of Injury, centered around my journey with chronic illness, forthcoming through a beautiful press, Sundress Publications, in 2020, as well. I’m very grateful for all the support my work has found, and I feel like I’ve been truly lucky to experience such generosity.


Anything you would like to add? I wrote Monarchs of the Northeast Kingdom in part to subvert expectations, especially for a suspenseful or dark sort of novel. Women aren’t likely to be found murdered in the book, for one. The protagonist is an older, chronically ill woman living alone. When I was researching comps, it was difficult to find other books featuring a chronically ill character, and I wanted to help change that. I didn’t want her to be too conventional nor too well-behaved, either; she sometimes makes bad decisions because of her isolation and inward view of the world, but she is completely herself. And she is far stronger than she thinks. I don’t want to give too much away. But I think readers will be surprised by the book.  (Left:  Painting, "Anne From Monarches of the Northeast Kingdom" attributed to Emily Hinds, a student of Chera Hammons Miller.)

     It’s also very much an animal story, especially a horse story. Horses have been a lifelong passion, and I’ve spent most of my life around them. Particularly horses with little training or with problems, since I’ve never been able to afford to buy the really gentle, well broke ones. (Sometimes I think my idea of heaven, especially on my bad illness days, would be a really well-broke, hard-to-spook horse I could just get on and ride! But I wouldn’t trade my current herd for anything, of course.) It was important to me to portray the animals as characters, also—they aren’t fillers—they have an important place in the book’s plot, they have unique personalities, and the main character, Anna, adjusts her interactions with them according to their individual traits, as I do with my own animals. I hope the real value inherent in these lovely beasts comes through.

Chera Hammons is the Writer-in-Residence at West Texas A&M University. Her work has appeared in Beloit Poetry Journal, Foundry, Rattle, Ruminate, Tar River, THRUSH, Tupelo Quarterly, Valparaiso Poetry Review, and elsewhere. She is a winner of the 2017 PEN Southwest Book Award for Poetry and nominee for 2018 Best of the Net. Forthcoming books include a volume of poetry through Sundress Publications and a novel through Torrey House Press. She lives in Amarillo, TX, with her husband, five horses, three cats, a dog, a rabbit, and three chickens.

INSIDE THE EMOTION OF FICTION links

001   11 15 2018 Nathaniel Kaine’s
Thriller Novel
John Hunter – The Veteran

002   11 18 2018 Ed Protzzel’s
Futuristic/Mystery/Thriller
The Antiquities Dealer 

003   11 23 2018 Janice Seagraves’s
Science Fiction Romance
Exodus Arcon

004   11 29 2018 Christian Fennell’s
Literary Fiction Novel
The Fiddler in the Night

005  12 02 2018 Jessica Mathews’s
Adult Paranormal Romance
Death Adjacent

006  12 04 2018 Robin Jansen’s
Literary Fiction Novel
Ruby the Indomitable

007  12 12 2018  Adair Valerez’s
Literary Fiction Novel
Scrim

008  12 17 218 Kit Frazier’s
Mystery Novel
Dead Copy

009 12 21 2019 Robert Craven’s
Noir/Spy Novel
The Road of a Thousand Tigers

010 01 13 2019 Kristine Goodfellow’s
Contemporary Romantic Fiction
The Other Twin

011 01 17 2019 Nancy J Cohen’s
Cozy Mystery
Trimmed To Death

012 01 20 2019 Charles Salzberg’s
Crime Novel
Second Story Man

013 01 23 2019 Alexis Fancher’s
Flash Fiction
His Full Attention

014 01 27 2019 Brian L Tucker’s
Young Adult/Historical
POKEWEED:  AN ILLUSTRATED NOVELLA

015 01 31 2019 Robin Tidwell’s
Dystopian
Reduced

016 02 07 2019 J.D. Trafford’s
Legal Fiction/Mystery
Little Boy Lost

017 02 08 2019 Paula Shene’s
Young Adult ScieFi/Fantasy/Romance/Adventure
My Quest Begins 

018 02 13 2019 Talia Carner’s
Mainstream Fiction/ Suspense/ Historical
Hotel Moscow

019 02 15 2019 Rick Robinson’s
Multidimensional Fiction
Alligator Alley

020 02 21 2019 LaVerne Thompson’s
Urban Fantasy
The Soul Collectors

021 02 27 2019 Marlon L Fick’s
Post-Colonialist Novel
The Nowhere Man

022 03 02 2019 Carol Johnson’s
Mainstream Novel
Silk And Ashes

023 03 06 2019 Samuel Snoek-Brown’s
Short Story Collection
There Is No Other Way to Worship Them

024 03 08 2019 Marlin Barton’s
Short Story Collection
Pasture Art

025 03 18 2019 Laura Hunter’s
Historical Fiction
Beloved Mother

026 03 21 2019 Maggie Rivers’s
Romance
Magical Mistletoe

027  03 25 2019 Faith Gibson’s
Paranormal Romance
Rafael

028 03 27 2019 Valerie Nieman’s
Tall Tale
To The Bones

029 04 04 2019 Betty Bolte’s
Paranormal Romance
Veiled Visions of Love

030 04 05 2019  Marianne Maili’s
Tragicomedy
Lucy, go see

031 04 10 2019 Gregory Erich Phillips’s
Mainstream Fiction
The Exile


032 04 15 2019 Jason Ament’s
Speculative Fiction
Rabid Dogs

033 04 24 2019 Stephen P. Keirnan’s
Historical Novel
The Baker’s Secret

034 05 01 2019 George Kramer’s
Fantasy
Arcadis: Prophecy Book

035 05 05 2019 Erika Sams’s
Adventure/Fantasy/Romance
Rose of Dance

036 05 07 2019 Mark Wisniewski’s
Literary Fiction
Watch Me Go

037 05 08 2019 Marci Baun’s
Science Fiction/Horror
The Whispering House

038 05 10 2019 Suzanne M. Wolfe’s
Historical Fiction
Murder By Any Name

039 05 12 2019 Edward DeVito’s
Historical/Fantasy
The Woodstock Paradox

040 05 14 2019 Gytha Lodge’s
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She Lies In Wait

041 05 16 2019 Kari Bovee’s
Historical Fiction/Mystery
Peccadillo At The Palace:  An Annie Oakley Mystery

042 05 20 2019 Annie Seaton’s
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Follow Me

043 05 22 2019 Paula Rose Michelson’s
Inspirational Christian Romance
Rosa & Miguel – Love’s Legacy: Prequel to The Naomi
Chronicles

044 05 24 2019 Gracie C McKeever’s
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On The Edge

045 06 03 2019 Micheal Maxwell’s
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The Soul of Cole

046 06 04 2019 Jeanne Mackin’s
Historical
The Last Collection:  A Novel of Elsa Schiaparelli and
Coco Chanel

047 06 07 2019 Philip Shirley’s
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048 06 08 2019 Bonnie Kistler’s
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The House on Fire

049 06 13 2019 Barbara Taylor Sissel’s
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Tell No One

050 06 18 2019 Charles Salzberg’s
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“No Good Deed” from Down to the River

051 06 19 2019 Rita Dragonette’s
Historical Fiction
The Fourteenth of September

052  06 20 2019 Nona Caspers’s
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The Fifth Woman


053 06 26 2019 Jeri Westerson’s
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Shadows in the Mist

054 06 28 2019 Brian Moreland’s
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The Devil’s Woods

055 06 29 2019
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Wings Unseen

056 07 02 2019 Randee Green’s
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Criminal Misdeeds

057 07 03 2019 Saralyn Ricahrd’s
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#058 07 04 2019 Hannah Mary McKinnon’s
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#059 07 05 2019 Sonia Saikaley’s
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The Allspice Bath

#060 07 09 2019 Olivia Gaines’s
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Blind Luck

#061 07 11 2019 Anne Raeff’s
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Winter Kept Us Warm

#062 07 12 2918 Vic Sizemore’s
Literary Fiction-Short Stories
I Love You I’m Leaving

#063 07 13 2019 Deborah Riley Magnus’s
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THE ORPHANS BOOK ONE:  THE LOST RACE
TRILOGY

#064 07 14 2019 Elizabeth Bell’s
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NECESSARY SINS

#065 07 15 2019 Lori Baker Martin’s
Literary Novel
BITTER WATER

#066 08 01 2019 Sabine Chennault’s
Historical Novel
THE CORPSMAN’S WIFE

#067 08 02 2019 Margaret Porter’s
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BEAUTIFUL INVENTION:  A NOVEL OF HEDY LAMARR


#068 08 04 2019 Hank Phillippi Ryan’s
Suspense
THE MURDER LIST

069 08 08 2019 Diana Y. Paul’s
Literary Mainstream Fiction
THINGS UNSAID

070 08 10 2019 Phyllis H. Moore’s
Women’s Historical Fiction
BIRDIE & JUDE

071 08 11 2019 Sara Dahmen’s
Historical Fiction
TINSMITH 1865

072  08 19 2019 Carolyn Breckinridge’s
Short Story Collection
KALIEDESCOPE & OTHER STORIES

073 08 21 2019 Alison Ragsdale’s
Emotional Women’s Fiction
THE ART OF REMEMBERING

074  08 22 2019 Lee Matthew Goldberg’s
Suspense Thriller
THE DESIRE CARD

075 08 23 2019 Jonathan Brown’s
Mystery/Amateur P.I.
THE BIG CRESCENDO

076 09 02 2019 Chera Hammons Miller’s
Literary Fiction w/ suspense, concern with animals & land management
Monarchs of the Northeast Kingdom

Thursday, August 29, 2019

CRC BLOG Analysis on "THE HEART'S NECESSITIES: LIFE IN POETRY by Jane Tyson Clement and Becca Stevens




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CRC BLOG ANALYSIS On:
THE HEART’S NECESSITIES: 
LIFE IN POETRY
by Jane Tyson Clement and Becca Stevens
“Seasonal Interlude Amongst Two Artists”

The heart’s necessities
include the interlude
of frost-constricted peace
on which the sun can brood
--Excerpt from Jane Tyson Clement’s poem “Winter”,
--Excerpt From Becca Stevens’s song “Tillery”

This is the mark of a great artist:  that she can write something as if she’s speaking directly to you at a particular moment, and yet, with the same line, speak just as clearly to you in a different moment.
--Becca Stevens, excerpt from Prelude, The Heart’s Necessities: Life In Poetry

          Jazz musician, singer, and songwriter Becca Stevens was grieving the loss of her dear friend and music collaborator Kenya Tillery (Right), who had succumbed to breast cancer on March 7, 2008. 
         
     She also experienced writer’s block:  she couldn’t find the words to honor Kenya through her own music and lyrics.  Becca came across an unopened book on her own library shelf – the poetry collection No One Can Stem the Tide that her father gave her for Christmas of 2007.  She opened the book and immediately found the two poems “Winter” and “February Thaw” side by side and incorporated phrases from those two poems to complete her eulogy song for Kenya titled “Tillery”.

Not only did they capture the season of loss so perfectly, but they did so with exactly the right rhythm and number of syllables to fit the melody I had already written.
--Becca, The Heart’s Necessities: Life In Poetry


     With the approval and permission from Jane’s original publishers Plough Publishing House and family, Becca has thus far recorded five songs using phrases from Jane’s own poetry: “Tillery”, “105”, “For You the Night is Still”, “Response to Criticism”, and “I Am No Artist”.  The song “Tillery” has been recorded on four different albums in four different settings and is now a band name.  All of the writing for the music and lyrics was done in numerous Brooklyn apartments Becca has lived throughout the past eleven years. And she plans on writing more music and lyrics, using lines from Jane’s own poetry.
Jane Tyson Clement (1917-2000) grew up in Manhattan, New York and always had a love for poetry.  She graduated from Horace Mann High School in 1935 and was awarded the high school’s top poetry prize.  She attended Smith College where she majored in literature and poetry.  She was awarded the Mary Augusta Jordon Prize for her poem “Strange Dominion” which was deemed the “best original literary work” of her 1939 Smith College graduating class.

     Even though she lived a life of privilege she was discouraged by the modern day Christian church’s tolerance of war, nationalism, racism, injustice, and inequality and felt those very things were in direct contradiction to Jesus Christ’s teachings of love and peace and the gospel.  

     She found respite on the ocean when she would vacation in Bay Head, New Jersey.  There she would walk the ocean’s shores and meditate and write poetry. 
     
     Becca also found solace in the ocean where she would vacation in Hilton Head, South Carolina.  When she read Jane’s poems about her experiences with the ocean she felt another connection with Jane.
     Soon Becca was not only incorporating Jane’s poems into her own music but writing conversation pieces in response to Jane’s poems and how those poems affected her life.  
All of this, along with photographs, is detailed in THE HEART’S NECESSITIES:  LIFE IN POETRY by Jane Tyson Clement and Becca Stevens; Edited by Veery Huleatt; jacket cover photo by Tabor Chichakly; and published by Plough Publishing House on April 22, 2019.
          Becca felt another connection to Jane with her poem “Into the Dark Which Is Not Dark” specifically when Jane writes these lines:  Into the dark which is not dark/ but only the light we cannot see,/ reluctantly I let you go.

       In The Heart’s Necessities: A Life In Poetry Becca writes about those lines, and her response could also be a description of her relationship with Jane:  Deciding that your creation is complete means it’s no longer in your control.  That can be unsettling, but if you want your hard work to live on beyond yourself, you have to share it.  Only then is it free to move through others, to grow, inspire and live a life of its own.  

          The Heart’s Necessities: Life In Poetry is a 182-page masterpiece of a communion between two artists, both women, both in love with poetry and the belief in its eternal power.  Jane communicates with Becca through her poetry and Becca responds by writing artistic pieces to Jane’s poetry, thus the living language between two women, across two realms of reality, and two time frames, continues – forming its own art form – that will continue
to live on as each page is read.       
          Communications between Jane and Becca continue about the similarities and differences of their relationships with their husbands:  Jane’s Bob (Right Top) and Becca’s Nate (Right Bottom), one of the similarities being that both do not believe in hasty love.

and know the hasty blossom
as swiftly will decay,
while other flowers are waiting
to grace a forward day.
--Jane “TO R.A.C. XVI”

Jane warns that hasty love, love that is rushed or clinging, will not last, while love that is patient and steadfast even through ups and downs or “necessary evils” has the strength to “grace a forward day.”
--Becca, The Heart’s Necessities: Life In Poetry       

The climax of The Heart’s Necessities:  Life In Poetry is when in the Fall of 1952 Jane and her husband Bob listen to a talk by prominent Philadelphia Quaker Florrie Potts about her visit to the Bruderhof, a Christian pacifist movement founded in Germany in 1920 by Eberhard and Emmy Arnold (Left); a movement Jane, her husband Bob, and their seven children embraced.   As a result Jane wrote some of her best poetry, which could be deemed spiritual by other Christian believers.  Becca finds all of Jane's poems, both secular and spiritual, to be inclusive to all people. 

       Every so often I come across a poem like “Out Of A Difficult And Troubled Season”, where Jane’s faith is apparent, but not in a way that seems exclusive, or that pushes away a non-Christian reader.
--Becca, The Heart’s Necessities: Life In Poetry

       To read “Out Of A Difficult And Troubled Season” click on the link below to order The Heart’s Necessities: Life In Poetry