Thursday, August 22, 2019

#74 Inside the Emotion of Fiction's "THE DESIRE CARD" by Lee Matthew Goldberg



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****Lee Matthew Goldberg’s The DESIRE CARD is #74 in the never-ending series called INSIDE THE EMOTION OF FICTION where the Chris Rice Cooper Blog (CRC) focuses on one specific excerpt from a fiction genre and how that fiction writer wrote that specific excerpt.  All INSIDE THE EMOTION OF FICTION links are at the end of this piece. 


Name of fiction work? And were there other names you considered that you would like to share with us?  The Desire Card. At the very beginning it was called Fat Cats but only for a minute because that title was terrible.


Has this been published? If yes, what publisher and what publication date? Yes, published by Fahrenheit Press, February 2019.
http://www.fahrenheit-press.com/

What is the date you began writing this piece of fiction and the date when you completely finished the piece of fiction? I started it about seven years ago. It’s been through many drafts. Since it’s the first book in a series, I wrote later books and went back to make edits on this one.
Where did you do most of your writing for this fiction work? And please describe in detail.  Central Park. I have a favorite tree.

What were your writing habits while writing this work- did you drink something as you wrote, listen to music, write in pen and paper, directly on laptop; specific time of day?
I lot of the first draft of this was written in Central Park during a mild winter. I bundled up in an overcoat and wrote on a bench with gloves. I’ll never write in the winter again, but somehow it worked for this book.

What is the summary of this specific fiction work? Any wish fulfilled for the right price. That's the promise the organization behind The Desire Card gives to its elite clients - but sometimes the price may be more menacing than anyone could ever imagine. Harrison Stockton has lived an adult life of privilege and excess: a high-powered job on Wall Street fuels his fondness for alcohol and pills at the expense of a family he has no time for. Quite suddenly all of this comes crashing to a halt when he loses his job and at the same time discovers he almost certainly has only months left to live. Desperate, and with seemingly nowhere else left to turn, Harrison activates his Desire Card. What follows is a gritty and gripping quest that takes him from New York City to the slums of Mumbai and forces him to take chances, and make decisions, he never thought he'd ever have to face. When his moral descent threatens his wife and children, Harrison must decide whether to save himself at any cost, or do what's right and break his bargain with the mysterious group behind The Desire Card. 
     The Desire Card is a taut fast-paced thriller, from internationally acclaimed author Lee Matthew Goldberg, that explores what a man will do to survive when money isn't always enough to get everything he desires.

Please include just one excerpt and include page numbers as reference. This one excerpt can be as short or as long as you prefer.

       Page 1 from the book:

HARRISON STUMBLED INTO CENTRAL PARK CLUTCHING THE SILVER BRIEFCASE, HIS BODY SHAKING FROM BEING HUNTED. Clouds clogged the sky. The trees seemed like creatures towering over him. He turned around to see the man in the Humphrey Bogart mask running toward the entrance, a gun bulging from the guy’s inside pocket. The man’s cold eyes scanned the park, zeroing in. Harrison took off down a dirt path until he was alone with only the wind ringing in his ears.
     He wanted to collapse; he begged himself to just give in. Nature would destroy him soon anyway, and his shins were starting to feel like they’d been repeatedly stabbed. He coughed up an excess of blood and mucus that spilled down a rock. Now he’d gone so far down the trail that he couldn’t see where he entered. The sound of footsteps came from all directions. A distorted laugh caused all the nearby pigeons to shoot toward the sky. The laugh was followed by an eerie whistle that became louder and louder as he spun around expecting to see his pursuer.
     A shadow passed behind a tree, bigger than any animal. He propped himself up against a rock, too exhausted to move any farther, closing his eyes and waiting to die. He could see tomorrow’s headlines declaring his death as a mugging gone wrong.
     “Gracie,” he cried, trembling. “Brent, my boy…oh God.”
     He had pissed himself now, the urine hot and sticky as it trickled down his pants leg. He still held the silver briefcase close to his chest, resolving not to let it go without a fight.
The man in the Bogart mask emerged from behind a tree holding a gun.
     “Just hand it over, Mr. Stockton,” the man said. The voice box attached to his mouth made him sound robotic, weirdly calm. “You don’t want this to get any more complicated than it already has.”



Why is this excerpt so emotional for you as a writer to write? And can you describe your own emotional experience of writing this specific excerpt? It pulls you into the story with present action. Most of the book takes place in the past.

Were there any deletions from this excerpt that you can share with us? No, it always began that way.

Anything you would like to add? Thank you for the interview. It was a pleasure to do.



Lee Matthew Goldberg is the author of the novels SLOW DOWN (2015), THE MENTOR (2017), and THE DESIRE CARD (2019). He has been published in multiple languages and nominated for the 2018 Prix du Polar. The second book in the Desire Card series, PREY NO MORE, is forthcoming from Fahrenheit Press. His pilots and screenplays have been finalists in Script Pipeline, Stage 32, We Screenplay, the New York Screenplay, Screencraft, and the Hollywood Screenplay contests. After graduating with an MFA from the New School, his writing has also appeared in the anthology DIRTY BOULEVARD, The Millions, Cagibi, The Montreal Review, The Adirondack Review, The New Plains Review, Underwood Press and others. He is the co-curator of The Guerrilla Lit Reading Series (https://guerrillalit.wordpress.com/)He lives in New York City.
@LeeMatthewG


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002   11 18 2018 Ed Protzzel’s
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003   11 23 2018 Janice Seagraves’s
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004   11 29 2018 Christian Fennell’s
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005  12 02 2018 Jessica Mathews’s
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006  12 04 2018 Robin Jansen’s
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007  12 12 2018  Adair Valerez’s
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https://chrisricecooper.blogspot.com/2019/08/74-inside-emotion-of-fictions-desire.html

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