Tuesday, March 17, 2020

#137 Inside the Emotion of Fiction "12 Bullets" by O'Neil De Noux

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****O’Neil De Noux’s 12 BULLETS is #137 in the never-ending series called INSIDE THE EMOTION OF FICTION where the Chris Rice Cooper Blog (CRC) focuses on one specific excerpt from a fiction genre and how that fiction writer wrote that specific excerpt.  All INSIDE THE EMOTION OF FICTION links are at the end of this piece. 

Name of fiction work? And were there other names you considered that you would like to share with us? Name of novel is 12 Bullets. It is the fifth novel in the John Raven Beau New Orleans Police crime fiction series.

Has this been published? And it is totally fine if the answer is no. If yes, what publisher and what publication date? Published by Big Kiss Productions on August 15, 2019



What is the date you began writing this piece of fiction and the date when you completely finished the piece of fiction? Began writing on 4/1/2018 and finished first final draft 11/18/2018

Where did you do most of your writing for this fiction work? And please describe in detail. And can you please include a photo? Home office.


What were your writing habits while writing this work- did you drink something as you wrote, listen to music, write in pen and paper, directly on laptop; specific time of day? Daily work in home office. Drink coffee, listen to rock and roll music on occasion, compose on iMac computer and sometimes on MacBook Pro. Start early in the morning with frequent interruptions from cats, and life in general. Also interruptions from writing four short stories during the time I wrote 12 Bullets.


What excerpt of the book was the most emotional for you to write? This excerpt can be as short or as long as you prefer. SET UP: Main character is John Raven Beau (early 30s), NOPD Chief Inspector who is half-Cajun and half-Sioux.
Beau’s girlfriend Jessie surprises him with a special gift on his birthday. Jessie’s little sister Stefi is in the scene as well as Beau’s co-worker Jordan. Beau is a conflicted character, half happy-go-lucky Cajun and half deadly-serious Sioux. When he realizes what the gift signifies, this hard cop feels a well of emotion –

SCENE:
Jessie comes back into the room with a package, maybe three feet long, six inches wide. They clean off the coffee table and she puts the package in front of Beau, waits.
He unwraps it, his eyes growing wide.
“Know what it is?” Stefi asks.
He nods slowly.
“It opens here,” Jessie shows him the latches along the glass top of the cedar case. She offers him a small container of hand wipes and box of Kleenex.
“Professor Lannes at Loyola says you should sanitize your hands and wipe off before you touch it.
Beau cleans his hands, opens the case and lightly brushes his fingers across the gift.
“What is it?” Jordan asks.
“Wampum belt,” Beau’s mouth is dry. “Old.”
His fingers glide across the white beads, black and purple shells, feels the rough milkweed fibers holding the belt together.
“It’s 2 ¼ inches wide and 29 ½ inches long,” says Jessie. “It’s from an eastern tribe, the Lenape, also called the Delaware.”
“They friends with the Sioux?” Stefi asks.
Beau’s voice is raspy. “From New York, Connecticut, Rhode Island. Nowhere near the Sioux.”
“Professor Lannes says the Dutch bought Manhattan from a Lenape band,” says Jessie.
Beau nods. “Peter Minuit.”
Jessie goes on, “The professor ran a test, carbon dated the fibers – 1500 to 1510.”
She sees Beau’s eyes growing wet now. She tells him there is a message in the black shells. He looks at her for a moment and looks back at the belt.
“Language called Munsee.”
He nods. “Language of the Lenape.”
“The message reads, ‘I am Blue Swan Daughter of the Wind’.”
Beau’s breathing grows deeper, catches and he closes his eyes.
Stefi touches his arm. “What is it?”
Beau sits up straighter, takes in a breath.
“The people.” He clears his throat, wipes his eyes. “The native peoples of North America, including the Lenape, the Sioux – all tribes believe if your name lives, you live. You are in the trees and in the wind and feel the warmth of the sun. When a breeze rustles leaves, it is the people long gone, whispering to the living.” His voice catches and his eyes fill.
Beau lets out a long breath. “Over 500 years ago a Lenape maiden strung this together, creating this thing of beauty and declared to the world she was Blue Swan Daughter of the Wind.” He tries to clears his throat but his voice catches. “Her spirit –,” he clears his throat again his voice lower now.
“Her spirit has long ago traveled along the path of the stars to the highest of the Twelve Heavens and is with the maker of all things where the dead wait for the living to arrive.
“Today, we speak her name and she is here again among the living on the good Earth. Her name is no longer lost from the world because we know it and speak it. Blue Swan.” He wipes his eyes again.
“My ancestors would say it is a fine thing to reach across the long years. 500 years.”

Why is this excerpt so emotional for you to write? And can you describe your own emotional experience of writing this specific scene/excerpt? Not sure why is makes me well up with emotion but it does because of the link between Beau and a Lenape maiden gone for 500 years. I write historical fiction as well as crime fiction and the past fascinates me. As William Faulkner once said, “The past is never dead. In fact, it’s not even past.”

Were there any deletions from this excerpt that you can share with us? No deletions and I compose on the computer and rough drafts are typed over.

Other works you have published?  I have
41 books published, 400 short story sales and a screenplay produced.


Novels
Battle Kiss
Bourbon Street
Death Angels
Mafia Aphrodite
Mistik
Slick Time
USS Relentless












LaStanza Series Novels
1. Grim Reaper
2. The Big Kiss
3. Blue Orleans
4. Crescent City Kills
5. The Big Show
6. New Orleans Homicide
7. The Blue Nude
8. The Long Cold
9. Saint Lolita
10. Righteous Sentence









Beau Series Novels
1. John Raven Beau
2. City of Secrets
3. Nude in Red
4. The Great Beau
5. 12 Bullets
















Caye Series Novels
1. New Orleans Rapacious
2. Enamored
3. Hold Me, Babe
4. Dame Money




Dugas Series Novels
1. The French Detective
2. Howls in the Night

Lucifer Series Novels
Lucifer’s Tiger
Lucifer’s Falcon



Screenplay (filmed)
Waiting for Alaina







Short Story Collections
A Century of New Orleans Mysteries
LaStanza: New Orleans Police Stories
New Orleans Confidential
New Orleans Prime Evil
New Orleans Nocturnal
New Orleans Mysteries
New Orleans Irresistible
Hollow Point & The Mystery of Rochelle Marais
Backwash of the Milky Way






























Non-Fiction
Specific Intent
A Short Guide to Writing and Selling Fiction


Born in New Orleans, O’Neil De Noux is a prolific American writer of novels and short stories with 41 books published, over 400 short story sales and a screenplay produced in 2000. Much of De Noux’s writing is character-driven crime fiction, although he has written in many disciplines including historical fiction, children’s fiction, mainstream fiction, mystery, science-fiction, suspense, fantasy, horror, western, literary, religious, romance, erotica and humor.
Mr. De Noux was educated at Archbishop Rummel High School before attending Loyola University and securing a Bachelor of Science degree in European History at Troy University in Alabama. He is a US Army veteran and worked as an FBI Clerk and with the Jefferson Parish Sheriff’s Office, where he served in the Intelligence Division, the Regional Organized Crime Center and as a road deputy. 

                    Promoted to homicide detective, Mr. De Noux earned seven commendations before being named Homicide Detective of the Year. He is a graduate of the Southern Police Institute of the University of Louisville. (O'Neal is second from the right)
          A lucrative position as chief investigator with a New Orleans private investigative firm drew Mr. De Noux into private practice for eight years. He returned to law enforcement with the St. Bernard Parish Sheriff’s Office as a detective before moving on to work as a magazine editor and graphics designer. When his house was severely damaged by Hurricane Katrina, Mr. De Noux relocated to the northshore of Lake Pontchartrain for his final stint in law enforcement as a police investigator at Southeastern Louisiana University, Hammond, LA, retiring in 2017. (O'Neil Second from right on the second row from below)


O’Neil De Noux’s writing has garnered a number of awards including the UNITED KINGDOM SHORT STORY PRIZE, the SHAMUS AWARD (given annually by the Private Eye Writers of America to recognize outstanding achievement in private eye fiction), the DERRINGER AWARD (given annually by the Short Mystery Fiction Society to recognize excellence in short mystery fiction) and POLICE BOOK of the YEAR (awarded by PoliceWriters.com). Two of his stories have been featured in the prestigious BEST AMERICAN MYSTERY STORIES annual anthology (2003 and 2013).
In 2012, O’Neil De Noux received an Artist Services Career Advancement Award from the Louisiana Division of the Arts for BATTLE KISS, a 320,000-word epic set around the Battle of New Orleans.
O’Neil De Noux received the 2015 Literary Artist of the Year President’s Award from the St. Tammany Parish Art’s Council, St. Tammany Parish, LA.
He is a past Vice-President of the Private Eye Writers of America.
http://www.oneildenoux.com

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