Wednesday, December 11, 2019

#107 Inside the Emotion of Fiction "KILLER'S COUNTDOWN" by Wendy H Jones


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****Wendy H Jones’s KILLER’S COUNTDOWN is #107 in the never-ending series called INSIDE THE EMOTION OF FICTION where the Chris Rice Cooper Blog (CRC) focuses on one specific excerpt from a fiction genre and how that fiction writer wrote that specific excerpt.  All INSIDE THE EMOTION OF FICTION links are at the end of this piece. 

Name of fiction work? And were there other names you considered that you would like to share with us? Killer’s Countdown is the first book in the DI Shona McKenzie Mysteries. The title actually went through several iterations most of which I can’t remember now, however the very first one was Murder in Time. It sounded a bit too cozy mystery to me and this series is definitely not cozy. In the end the word Killer ended up in all the books in the series and every second word begins with C. It’s all part of the branding.


Fiction genre?  Ex science fiction, short story, fantasy novella, romance, drama, crime, plays, flash fiction, historical, comedy, movie script, screenplay, etc. This is crime fiction and the sub-genre is Police Procedural. However, it is slightly unusual in that the reader sees the killer’s story alongside the police story, although they don’t know who the killer is..

Has this been published? And it is totally fine if the answer is no.   If yes, what publisher and what publication date? The book was published in 2014 and is published under my own imprint of Scott and Lawson.

What is the date you began writing this piece of fiction and the date when you completely finished the piece of fiction? I started writing the book in 2012 and finished it in early 2014. The first draft was written in a month and then I spent the intervening time editing, re-editing and editing again.

Where did you do most of your writing for this fiction work?  And please describe in detail.  It was mainly written at my iMac computer in my office at home in Dundee, Scotland. I am very fortunate to have a large office, which also doubles as a library. I would like to say I designed this but I would be lying. When I bought the house everything was already in place. However, I did write some of it on trains etc. using my Macbook Air laptop. I can write anywhere especially since Macs sync to the cloud.

What were your writing habits while writing this work- did you drink something as you wrote, listen to music, write in pen and paper, directly on laptop; specific time of day? I’m a real technophile and do everything at a computer. I jot notes down on my phone and iPad using the Evernote app. I can then copy and paste when I get to my computer. Saying that, I usually have a notebook handy and jot notes down as well. I usually have a cup of tea or coffee by my side and I work in silence. Unless I am on the train when I use earphones and play music to block out ambient noise that might distract me. Anyone distracting me on a train when I am writing might find themselves written into the novel. As I write crime novels this may not end well.

What is the summary of the KILLER’S COUNTOWN? Dead Women. A Ruthless Killer. A Detective with something to prove. Newly promoted Detective Inspector Shona McKenzie struggles to cope with her new job, the respect of her colleagues, and the need to solve the hardest case of her life. Will she succeed?

A killer stalks the streets of Dundee, Scotland. Shona, having recently returned to Scotland, relies on the local knowledge of Sgt Peter Johnston and the rest of her team to help her track down the killer. However, this is no ordinary killer. Shona needs to use every trick in and out of the book to bring them to justice. The final revelation will shock you to the core.

Can you give the reader just enough information for them to understand what is going on in the excerpt? This is a flash-forward to a scene later in the book when DI Shona McKenzie is in a standoff with the killer. It sets the tone for the book and introduces the reader to the characters and the way they react in an explosive situation.

Please include just one excerpt and include page numbers as reference.  This one excerpt can be as short or as long as you prefer.

As I stared down the barrel of that gun I had a feeling, deep inside, that this would not end well. How did I find myself here, deep in the bowels of a frozen Scottish wood, eye to eye with the business end of a Browning Pistol? As I stood, motionless, adrenalin heightened my senses. The rough bark of the tree was cold against my skin as sweat froze on my neck. Acid bile rose in my throat, burning, threatening to erupt. I swallowed against this lava flow of vomit. I could see the gunman’s face with startling clarity, lit by the cool winter sun. Blue eyes. Devoid of any emotion. This was a killer’s mask. The hand, holding the gun, was unwavering. This was a hand that was strong, with only one purpose in mind. The chase ended here. Before the day was out, one of the two participants in this chilling game of cat and mouse would be dead. Of this I was certain.

Why is this excerpt so emotional for you as a writer to write?  And can you describe your own emotional experience of writing this specific excerpt? Even reading this now the excerpt gives me chills. It transports me to that frozen wood and I can feel the tension crackling off the page. This scene, the opening chapter of the book, was written to allow the reader to be transported to a wintry Dundee and to get inside the heads of both the protagonist and antagonist. Whilst writing it I felt a subliminal fear and yet a feeling of excitement, knowing this would be the first published words of mine the reader would see.

Were there any deletions from this excerpt that you can share with us? And can you please include a photo of your marked up rough drafts of this excerpt. As I write on a computer I don’t keep any rough drafts of work, so unfortunately I am unable to share them. However, I can say that the first line was not always the first line. I took the whole of the first paragraph and moved it to later in the book. The current first line was further down still but I felt it worked better as the opening. In fact, you could say it is a killer first line.

Other works you have published?
Cass Claymore Investigates
Antiques and Alibis

DI Shona McKenzie Mysteries
Killer’s Craft
Killer’s Cross
Killer’s Cut
Killer’s Crew
Killer’s Crypt

Fergus and Flora Mysteries
The Dagger’s Curse
The Haunted Broch

Bertie the Buffalo Series (Children’s Picture Books)
Bertie the Buffalo

Non-Fiction
Motivation Matters: Revolutionise Your Writing One Creative Step at a Time
Power Packed Book Marketing: Sell More Books

Edited Anthologies
New Life: Reflections for Lent
Christmas for Everyone

Anything you would like to add? I consider it an absolute privilege to be an author and am grateful to everyone who helped me along the way. In order to give back to other authors, I am honoured to be President of the Scottish Association of Writers, Secretary of the Society of Authors in Scotland and Webmaster of the Association of Christian Writers.


Award Winning Author Wendy H. Jones lives in Scotland, and her police procedural series featuring Detective Inspector Shona McKenzie, is set in the beautiful city of Dundee, Scotland. Wendy has led a varied and adventurous life.


Her love for adventure led to her joining the Royal Navy to undertake nurse training. After six years in the Navy she joined the Army where she served as an Officer for a further 17 years. This took her all over the world including Europe, the Middle East and the Far East. Much of her spare time is now spent travelling around the UK, and lands much further afield. As well as nursing Wendy also worked for many years in Academia.
This led to publication in academic textbooks and journals. Killer's Crew, the fifth book in the DI Shona McKenzie Mysteries, published by Books to Treasure, won the Books Go Social Book of the Year 2017. The Dagger's Curse is the first book in The Fergus and Flora Mysteries for Young Adults, was a finalist in the Woman Alive Magazine Readers Choice Award Book of the Year.  
Sarah Grace Publishing released Bertie the Buffalo, her first picture book, in November 2018. She is a popular public speaker, both nationally and internationally, and took a six-week book tour of the East Coast of the United Stares in August and September 2019.
https://www.wendyhjones.com


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