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Can you give the reader just enough information for them to understand what is going on in the excerpt? The day of Edwin’s funeral, a priest tells Annabel that one of Edwin’s first acts upon being released from prison was to write a will that would ensure she would receive the family house. She realizes that her brother truly had changed in prison—but now he’s dead and she cannot tell him so.
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A TRACE OF DECEIT