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writer wrote that specific excerpt. All INSIDE THE EMOTION OF FICTION links
are at the end of this piece. (Right: Stacia in 2018)
Fiction
genre? Ex science fiction, short story,
fantasy novella, romance, drama, crime, plays, flash fiction, historical,
comedy, movie script, screenplay, etc.
And how many pages long? This is a mystery/suspense novel, a genre I often
write in, along with romance. I’ve completed about 80 pages so far.
Has
this been published? And it is totally fine if the answer is no. If yes, what publisher and what publication
date? This
is a work in progress, and no part has been published yet, although I do
frequently share in writer’s groups.
What is
the date you began writing this piece of fiction and the date when you
completely finished the piece of fiction? I began writing this in 2014
and have been working on it off and on along with other shorter pieces I’ve
published.
Where did you do most of your writing
for this fiction work? And please describe in detail. And can you
please include a photo? I most often work in my home office or coffee shops.
Starbucks and Shari’s in south Sacramento are favorite places (my plug, if you
don’t mind, for the fine folks at the corner of Florin Road and Greenhaven
Drive.) I’ve attached a photo of me in my office. Pardon the mess. (Left)
What were your writing habits while writing this work- did you drink something as you wrote, listen to music, write in pen and paper, directly on laptop; specific time of day? I most often write on a laptop. In theory, I’m freshest in the morning; in reality, the time of day I can most often work is the afternoon or evening. I have to be drinking something, most often coffee or water, when I write.
What were your writing habits while writing this work- did you drink something as you wrote, listen to music, write in pen and paper, directly on laptop; specific time of day? I most often write on a laptop. In theory, I’m freshest in the morning; in reality, the time of day I can most often work is the afternoon or evening. I have to be drinking something, most often coffee or water, when I write.
What is the summary of this specific fiction work? In this suspense novel, Detective Sharona Feinstein investigates a suicide of a young artist, Gina Abrams. The case is about to close, but Sharona becomes increasingly suspicious that the suicide may have been murder, due to her conversations with the victim’s brother, Jude. Her attention focuses on the victim's neighbor, Barbara Wilcox, who seems obsessed with Gina. She is taking an unusual interest in the case, making odd claims to have been exceptionally close to the victim, harassing Jude, and even apparently stealing some of Gina’s belongings.
At the same time, Sharona is balancing her complex personal life with her
domestic partner Kevin and foster daughter, Michaela. In a prior novel, Sharona
and Kevin met when taken hostage in the retail store they both worked in. The
incident inspired both to go into law enforcement careers.
Can you give the reader just enough information for them to understand what is going on in the excerpt? This excerpt is a flashback in which Sharona reflects on when and why Wilcox has transferred her obsession for the late Gina Abrams to her, Sharona.
Can you give the reader just enough information for them to understand what is going on in the excerpt? This excerpt is a flashback in which Sharona reflects on when and why Wilcox has transferred her obsession for the late Gina Abrams to her, Sharona.
Please include the excerpt and include page numbers as reference. The excerpt can be as short or as long as you prefer.
Excerpt,
p. 14-16 :
I parked in front of Barbara’s house that day I
went out after my conversation with Jude about the strange neighbor. My
antennae went up immediately. Because the woman I recognized as Barbara Wilcox
was standing not in her own yard but in Gina Abrams’s—actually now Jude
Abrams’s—yard next door to hers. There was a “For Sale” sign on the lush lawn
that spread out for what seemed half a mile from the porch to the street.
Barbara
was lumbering about, watering the bushes around the front porch with what even
I recognized as a pretty ineffectual although cute little pitcher. It made kind
of a weird incongruous picture, the bear-like woman with her pretty little
canister, watering the plants like she was freaking Bo Peep or something.
I
had just gotten out of the car to mosey on up to ask her what the hell she
thought she was doing, as I was pretty sure she didn’t have Jude’s permission
to be there, and it looked like he’d hired pros to take of the lawn anyway.
But then my phone went off. I glanced at it and
saw it was my commanding officer’s number. Tom Morris, of the chronically
fraught home life and multiple “sick” days that left me floundering, figuring
out the job on my own.
I answered the call. “Feinstein.”
“Sharona, where in hell are you?”
“And good morning to you, too, Tom.” I rolled my
eyes, a bad habit. “What’s up?”
“I’m sitting here in my office wondering where
you are while I’m taking a million calls and my lieutenant is breathing down
neck and four people are waiting to talk to me.”
“Oh, sorry about that.” I eyed Barbara.
She was just standing there staring at me from
across the lawn, the pitcher tipped.
It weirded me out a little. I turned my
attention back to the call. “Really sorry about that, Tom. Truly. But I didn’t
even know you’d come in. On another note,” I lowered my voice, although there
was no way Barbara would be able to hear unless she had some kind of
high-frequency auditory implants, “where I am is outside the Abrams’s
place—remember Gina Abrams, killed herself back around the New Year? —anyway,
standing here watching her totally creepy neighbor water Gina’s bushes. The
brother reports she’s stalking him.”
“Just get in here, asap.”
“Absolutely.” I shook my head and hung up.
And now, looking back, I think it might have
been something as stupid as that, that little conversation that I had all but
forgotten until sitting here with plenty of time to think, that set off the
whole episode. Just me standing there, phone in one hand, other hand on my hip,
rolling my eyes, in one of my signature smart-ass poses, totally abandoning any
professional demeanor for a what must have been a couple of minutes at the
most.
Then I pulled myself together and started up the
drive, smoothing down my shirt, tucking in strands of my hair. It was already
heating up at not even ten in the morning and would be sweltering by noon. The
drive was long, circular, the house set back from the street.
Red flags started going up about then, as I
wondered how Barbara could afford this neighborhood, single women with badly
permed hair and polyester slacks and no apparent job not usually being rich. In
the routine interview we did of the neighbors during the initial stages in the
investigation, she’d stated she had a “home-based business.” I’d thought that
meant lotions or soap or something, but maybe she was one of the new internet
millionaires who worked from home, who knew.
I called out when I got closer, “Barbara
Wilcox?”
She was still staring. And actually then it
didn’t seem so weird, something that I put down to just not being very used to
or comfortable with encounters with the police.
She finally nodded as I stopped a nonthreatening
three feet back from her.
“I’m Detective Sharona Feinstein. We talked about three months ago regarding
Gina Abrams’s death.”
She nodded again, still staring at me.
Most people would have said something by then,
like “yes,” or “hi,” so I wondered about this, that maybe it wasn’t just general
unease with the police that I was looking at.
“Well,” I said, “Jude Abrams has been into my
office to talk to me about you.”
Her muddy brown eyes widened. Then she nodded.
“Yes.”
She set the watering can down on the porch
railing and wiped her hands off on her slacks. “Would you like to come over to
my place so that we can talk? I think we should
talk about Jude.”
That was interesting, that she’d actually want to talk to me about the very guy
she’d reportedly been harassing.
“Yes, let’s do that.” I wanted to get her off
the Abrams’s property anyway.
I walked with her across the lawn to her place.
I asked, “How are you this morning?”
“Fine, Detective.” She now was coming off as
normal, just distracted, as if she had a number of pressing chores to take care
of today, this being just one of them. She was looking down, searching her
pockets, probably for her house keys.
“I won’t keep you long,” I said. “Let’s just sit
out here on your porch.” I was following her up the steps and nearly stumbled
over a loose board. “So did Jude ask you to water his bushes?”
“Oh, no.” She blinked. “Gina did.”
“Gina did?” Gina had left no notes, letters,
anything, and it had seemed, like many suicides, an impulsive act, after having
consumed too much alcohol that night, as the toxicology report had shown. “Why
would she have asked you to water her bushes?”
“Because she told me she was going on vacation.”
“I see.” I followed her suit and sat on the
porch swing with the faded flower print cushions. The house’s paint job, I
noted, was cracked and peeling. “You didn’t mention that when we spoke to you
after Ms. Abrams’s death.”
“I know. I just forgot about it. I was
still in shock.”
That actually did seem possible. “And you
remembered it when?”
“The next day. When I remembered her cats, too,
that the poor cats had to be fed.”
“Her cats. You’ve been feeding her cats?”
“Yes, two of them. She loved them.” Her eyes
teared up.
People
did get emotional over their pets—I could relate to that, having just dropped a
significant amount of money for treating my own cat for an abscessed cheek.
“Did she ask you to feed her cats, too?”
“Yes. She told me she was going up to Lake Tahoe
for a couple of days.”
“Okay.” So according to this new testimony it
seemed there’d been some plan involved. “How are you feeding the cats?”
“I’m just putting some food out on the porch.
The cats go in and out of the house.”
“So Gina didn’t leave you a key?”
“Oh, I had a key to her place. We had each
other’s keys.” As if out of habit, Barbara set the swing into motion by pushing
the floor with her foot. The swing creaked a little, and she stopped. “But Jude
changed the locks.”
“Okay. Let’s get back to Jude. Why isn’t he taking care of the plants and the
cats?”
“Because Gina told me to.”
“And did Jude tell you not to?”
“Yes. He keeps telling me to stay off the
property. But Gina did ask me to do it. So don’t I have some responsibility,
some right—?”
“I’m sorry.” I stood up. So maybe that was all
this was, a simple misunderstanding between neighbors. I hoped so, hoped I
wouldn’t have to come out here again. “I
understand your pain, Ms. Wilcox. And I appreciate your commitment to Gina and
how you want to honor her wishes. But the property now belongs to Jude Abrams.
If he’s told you to stay away, you need to stay away. Stop texting him; stop
calling him. Do you understand?”
And she nodded, staring up at me without
speaking, eyes wide and glistening.
internal void.
Other works you have published? I would like to mention in particular the published short works that feature the same protagonist, Sharona Feinstein: “Father” and “Three Methods to Save Your Life.” Forthcoming are “Group Bonding” and “The Real Me.”
Past publishing credits include
short stories in The Blue Moon Review,
Sambatyon, True Story, Storgy Magazine, Forge, and The Apalachee Review. Finally, I was a second-place winner in The Writer’s Digest Popular Fiction Awards of
2010 for “Father.”
Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/drstacialevy/
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